Crit 2 Boards & Feedback

Here are the boards I had for the second feedback crit:

A4 Brief Summaries:



A3 Progress Boards:




Here is the feedback I received for course-mates:

  • Ideas have been thought through well but I need to show more development & visual experimentation.
  • I can explore the Handyman website more throughly and look at different colours and logo ideas.
  • More development is needed for the Pet Trails app design and also need to look at how the app would be advertised & marketed.
  • I should look at how the NHS therapy app could be explained and advertised/delivered to patients.
  • With the reading app I need to look at the types of content that people will want to access.

 Some additional comments from my tutorial with Si Scott:

  • He thinks I should experiment with more illustration and stimulating graphics to see if I can make the apps more engaging for the audience.
  • An example of this is that the Pet Trails app could change its theme depending on species of pet the own has.

Action Plan:

  • Research the marketing and advertising of apps and other software.
  • Look at how I could expand my briefs to cover how the apps would be promoted and explained to their audiences.
  • Experiment with and expand the visual development of my app designs to try and make them more engaging for their intended audiences.

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