Here are the boards I had for the second feedback crit:
A4 Brief Summaries:
A3 Progress Boards:
Here is the feedback I received for course-mates:
- Ideas have been thought through well but I need to show more development & visual experimentation.
- I can explore the Handyman website more throughly and look at different colours and logo ideas.
- More development is needed for the Pet Trails app design and also need to look at how the app would be advertised & marketed.
- I should look at how the NHS therapy app could be explained and advertised/delivered to patients.
- With the reading app I need to look at the types of content that people will want to access.
Some additional comments from my tutorial with Si Scott:
- He thinks I should experiment with more illustration and stimulating graphics to see if I can make the apps more engaging for the audience.
- An example of this is that the Pet Trails app could change its theme depending on species of pet the own has.
Action Plan:
- Research the marketing and advertising of apps and other software.
- Look at how I could expand my briefs to cover how the apps would be promoted and explained to their audiences.
- Experiment with and expand the visual development of my app designs to try and make them more engaging for their intended audiences.